User:Pisawagner/Teratology/Nicnikk Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Pisawagner


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Pisawagner/Teratology?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Teratology

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I thought this group's contributions to their sandbox were good additions and added details that supported the main article. In the first section of edits, "Long before modern science, it was understood that heavy metals could cause negative affects to those who were exposed," I believe affects should be changed to effects. Also, in the sentence "Lead exposure during the first trimester of pregnancy leads to the greatest predictably of cognitive development issues after birth," predictably should be changed to predictability. Other than those two edits on grammar, I think it is well written. The other two sections in the sandbox were good starting points, and further details would make it even better. Overall, I think this group did a great job on their edits.