User:Pitandpendulum/Atlantic surf clam/Muffinwrites Peer Review

General info
Pitandpendulum
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Pitandpendulum/Atlantic surf clam
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Atlantic surf clam

Lead
I might suggest seeing if you can find a citation for the discussion of its size instead of just removing it! As someone who doesn't know anything about clams, that line is somewhat useful in gaining an idea of what the creature I'm reading about looks like. I would also consider adding a few more sentences to the lead that summarize the bulk of other information you're going to discuss (reproduction and life habits) so that readers know what they're going to learn about!

Content
I really like the content you've added to this article. It gives a more scientific perspective to an article that formerly lacked one, and the added information makes this a much more useful article for those who want to read about the species of clam, not just its uses. The content is neutral, professional, and notable. Great job!

Organization
The organization of your information looks good, and I didn't notice any glaring errors during my read through. Glancing at the article as well, I might suggest combining "distribution" and "habitat" as they each are only one line and might do better as a single section.

Sources and References
I would be a little wary of using CNN, but otherwise your sources look good! All of the new info has sources, though I might suggest finding the source for the last sentence of your lead draft, as you are editing that sentence as well.

Images and Media
You haven't added any images, but the ones in the article itself look good! If you have time, you could look into adding a few more images that show the clam in its natural habitat, or what the fishing operations look like. Images are something I'm still working on adding to my own article!

Overall Impressions
Your content absolutely improved the article, and I really liked the scientific perspective it added to the topic. In terms of improvements, I would just suggest that you think about what order the sections you are adding to the article could best go in to give the most comprehensible information and have logic flow. I'm really impressed with the quality of your writing, and I loved learning about this interesting creature!