User:Pixels3587/Separation anxiety in dogs/Wormygal Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Pixels3587


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Pixels3587/Separation_anxiety_in_dogs?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article
 * Separation anxiety in dogs

Evaluate the drafted changes
The introductory sentence of the article is strong and provides a good overview to the topic. The lead in the draft should be updated to include the addition of the topics Common Misdiagnoses and Diagnose. The lead is concise and includes information that is present throughout the article.

The sentence in the Common Misdiagnoses paragraph is awkward, it could be reworded to say, "...and tests relating to the animals age and medical history may be required." The sentence talking about incomplete housetraining is redundant regarding the age of the dog and could be reworded to say, "...it is more prominent in younger dogs." In the Environmental Management paragraph, the term "lip licking" is used, this behaviour should be further defined as the reader may not know what this symptom means.

Two of the references provided in the draft are from the 1990's and the information could potentially be backed up by newer sources. The ASPCA and the Humane Society are websites and should be replaced or paired with a peer-reviewed journal article reference to provide more reliable information to the reader.

The content added is relevant to the topic and provides further detail on the topic. The content is neutral and does not persuade the reader in any way. The content in the draft is easy to read and provides beneficial information to the reader about the topic. The draft contains useful information that is backed up by sources and the links to the references work. The content added has made the article more complete and more well rounded with the addition of the new paragraphs.

The information provided is very useful and is written well, this article will benefit many people in learning about Separation anxiety in dogs. The draft needs some small revisions to fix some awkward sentences, overall it is a very good article.