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Article Evaluation This article is directly related to SDGs goal 6. It addresses a variety of problems associated with the scarcity of water such as diseases, disasters, pollution, etc. It keeps a neutral tone.
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 * that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources. Option 1  Article title  "water issues in developing countries"
 * that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources. Option 1  Article title  "water issues in developing countries"
 * Is the article's content relevant to the topic? Is it written neutrally?  Does each claim have a citation?  Are the citations reliable?  Does the article tackle one of Wikipedia's equity gaps (coverage of historically underrepresented or misrepresented populations or subjects)?  Check out the article's Talk page to see what other Wikipedians are already contributing. Consider posting some of your ideas to the article's Talk page, too.
 * There are several claims that aren't endorsed by valid sources. For instance, in the sub-section "alternative sources", there is only one source (whose link doesn't work). Besides, citation 22                                   -24, 26 aren't connected to the original pages any more. Although the references are retrieved from reliable institutions, parts of the article are needed to be backed up again.
 * In terms of equity gaps, there is still room for improvement. The article mostly focus on the solution for the issues rather than the description of current situation. To make it more engaging in equity gaps, I guess further information would be helpful. As one says in talk page, some information are only applicable only specific asian or African countries. Detailed explanation for other regions such as South America is lacked.
 * I didn't understand why the sub-section "Global programs" is included to the main section "Society and culture" although there is one exclusive sub-section. "Global programs" could be either deleted or replaced to "Society and culture". In the talk page, one simply points out the lack of work. The article could be improved by adding more data and knowledge.

Sources

UNDP Africa. https://www.africa.undp.org/content/rba/en/home/sustainable-development-goals/goal-6-clean-water-and-sanitation.html

Water Facts of Eastern Africa https://www.justoneafrica.org/water-facts/

How to Buy a Hydration Bladder https://www.outdoorgearlab.com/topics/camping-and-hiking/best-hydration-bladder/buying-advice#gallery-3