User:Pizzaguru16/Co-benefits of climate change mitigation/Hockeydunkin Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Drew and Matt


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Pizzaguru16/Co-benefits of climate change mitigation


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Pizzaguru16/Co-benefits of climate change mitigation

Evaluate the drafted changes
Article Title: “Co-Benefits of Climate Change Mitigation”

Notes:

-       Main Co-Benefits Notes

o   Employment and Economic Development and Benefits of Teleworking should be numbered to help the reader understand

o   Great case study from the UK!

o   Make sure the citations are in the format that Wikipedia uses (if you need help I can help you)

o   Make sure the references are in the Wikipedia format as well

o   Great usage of the article and study without copy pasting it

o   The first sentence of the Benefits of Teleworking paragraph is jumbly

§  Try reading it out loud to eliminate unwanted words or phrases

o   Again, the addition of the case study makes your point clear

§  Make sure you add citations for anything you used

§  And the corresponding references too

o    It might be interesting if you add some research that was done on COVID and how that has decreased the impacts of climate change

§  I know we have looked at some graphs in class would be interesting to add to this  article