User:Pjaml/Biogeochemistry/Kurt Krautmann Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Pjaml


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Pjaml/Biogeochemistry


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Biogeochemistry

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello, I see that you're editing a previously made page. I really like the idea of commenting on the early greek development on the field and some more information in that section would be great. Your development of the section mentioning Hutchinson is also interesting. I think your addition does a good job linking to other pages. On what you've added, I think the tone is very neutral and easy to read. One suggestion I have would be to utilize a few more resources. The citations seem a little thin and could be better spread out. I think your outline of adding a brief summary of the different cycles will be great and really help develop the page.