User:Pjaml/Biogeochemistry/Pearl2070 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Pjaml


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Pjaml/Biogeochemistry?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Biogeochemistry

Evaluate the drafted changes
Neutral tone of the draft looks good, plenty of useful hyperlinks to other wiki pages.

Some wording could be clarified. For example, what is "in the tradition of Mendeleev?" Some events mentioned in the last paragraph could have dates added.