User:Pjaml/Biogeochemistry/Starfruit101 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Pjaml, Doebl035


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Pjaml/Biogeochemistry?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Biogeochemistry

Evaluate the drafted changes
I feel that this specific article focuses more on the historic aspect of biochemistry more than biochemistry itself. I like the descriptions of the different types of spheres regarding the 20th and 21st centuries. I feel like your sandbox is kind of empty, so maybe work on adding a lead and what else is required on the rubric in canvas. Overall since i enjoy history the facts you added about the greeks I fount that pretty cool.