User:Pjos6744/OLES2129

University of Sydney - OLES2129

Hammer. Source [4] was unreliable and hence i added another more reliable source that contained the same information (in source [5])

Hoffmeyer. I added sources to the 3 names given in the article, as there was no references within the page.

Good & Fruity. This article was of low importance. Steps that can be taken to improve the quality of the article is adding references, adding more information, Giving it a proper structure including an introduction and appropriate subheading

Characteristics of a Featured Article (FIFA World Cup)

- The titles in the article describe the information they are presenting well, with Capitalisation of the first letter, no punctuation at the end, no starts with A, An or The

- Large number of citations, meaning a variety of sources that are input into the article to make sure the best information is being presented

- Time and dates are well presented with each piece of information being supported by an appropriate and correct date

- All quotes in the article are immediately and correctly cited

- Sufficient media files (mainly Images) that are appropriately implemented such that they correspond to the adjacent information

- It writes out both the full name and the abbreviation at first occurence. This is the correct Abbreviation technique pertaining to a Featured article

https://web.archive.org/web/20070901163342/http://www.bradman.org.au/html/s02_article/article_view.asp?id=112&nav_cat_id=131&nav_top_id=56

Author background

- The website is fairly reliable, as the museum is dedicated to the life of Don Bradman.

- However, as no official author is mentioned it is hard to determine validity of website

Where was the source published

Internet.

Is the information within the source Independently verifiable

- The website information can be found across multiple other websites, hence the source can be classified as independently verifiable

- Information on the website is consistent with other sources.

Age of sources relative to topic.

- It was published on 1st Sep. 2007 and Don Bradman’s last game was in 1948.

- However, as it is a biography the time period is irrelevant.

Intent of information, targeted audience

- The Intent of information is to inform us of his early life and career

- There is no specific targeted audience, however given the topic it is assumed the target audience will be those interested in cricket

Does the source omit important details and overrepresent others?

- It briefly mentions key aspects of his early life (family, education etc.)

- However, it does overrepresent his cricketing training in his early life and how he got into cricket

Is thUTORIAL 8:e information fact or opinion?

- The information is fact

Tutorial 8:

Bad Article : Operation Shady RAT

Improvements:

- no subheadings or other sections

- few citations/ references

- not an appropriate length for an article

- no images or media files

- no infoboxes

- very short lead/summary

Good Features:

- proper grammar and punctuation

- has link to other relevant pages (i.e. See Also)

- has a clear title

- unbiased

- reliable sources

Wikiproject: Computing

according to the computing Wikiproject page, the article falls under the lowest class quality (stub-class) which means a very basic description of the topic where any editing and additional information added would be useful to the article. Furthermore, on the talk page a user is quoted as saying "This article was a redirect to McAfee, which makes no sense at least currently as the McAfee article has no information on Operation Shady RAT", hence further classifying it as a poor article.

Good Article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/FC_Barcelona

Good features:

—well organised with timeframe;

—many photos and illustrations are included to provide a better understanding to readers;

—different stages were divided by different coaches as a significant era time point;

—honors and records were provided as a statistical prospective for readers;

—players and staff are introduced to give a better picture for the formation of the club.

The article is good by integrating different parts logically and systematically. On the right side of the page it shows the seal of the club and more information about the stadium. The first major part of the article introduces the history of the club with major events or progress. The history part was divided by different coaches as different stages to provide readers better overview and understanding about its progress and achievement.