User:Pkayku/Carolyn Parker/Bibliography

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The article topic has a limited number of sources for new information. The sources I have added support information already existing in the article but are not cited; the original article does a good job of finding different sources to support new information. To enhance the quality of the article on Carolyn Beatrice Parker, I will be concentrating on making changes to the grammar and structure of the article, reviewing for clarity, coherence, and readability, ensuring that the prose flows smoothly and is accessible to a broad audience.


 * 1) Lead:
 * 2) * Craft a clear and engaging introductory paragraph that succinctly introduces Carolyn Beatrice Parker and her significance in the field of physics. I will remove non supporting sentences/ information that is not concise.
 * 3) * Strictly and clearly outline her involvement in the Dayton Project and her pioneering role as an African-American physicist.
 * 4) Early Life and Education:
 * 5) * Present Parker's early life and education in a concise manner, focusing on key details such as her upbringing in Gainesville, Florida, and her academic achievements at Fisk University, the University of Michigan, and MIT. Additional information will be added.
 * 6) * Seperate the Early Life and Education into two different sections.
 * 7) Career:
 * 8) * Describe and expand on Parker's career trajectory, highlighting her work as a physicist on the Dayton Project and her subsequent role as an assistant professor at Fisk University.
 * 9) * Use clear and direct language to explain the significance of her contributions to scientific research and education.
 * 10) Personal Life and Legacy:
 * 11) * Provide a brief, concise overview of Parker's personal life, including her battle with leukemia and her impact on future generations of scientists.
 * 12) * Seperate the personal Life and Legacy into two different sections
 * 13) References and Citations:
 * 14) * Ensure all information is properly sourced with inline citations, following a consistent referencing style.
 * 15) * Verify the credibility of existing sources and supplement them with additional references where necessary to support the article's claims.