User:Pkayku/Carolyn Parker/Callierichard27 Peer Review

General info
Pkayku
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Pkayku/Carolyn_Parker?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template :
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Carolyn Parker

Evaluate the drafted changes
Notes:

- A lot of great information was added!

- The level of detail was great

- The sentence structure flowed very well while still being concise

- The legacy section is good, could be a little more factual

- Great addition to the education section

- Consider adding a picture