User:Pkayku/Carolyn Parker/Gcoale Peer Review

General info
Pkayku
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/courses/Skidmore_College/Physics_and_Society_(Spring_2024)/articles/edited?showArticle=71124908
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Carolyn Parker

Evaluate the drafted changes
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The additions made to the article are in line with wikipedia guidelines and definitely add to the understanding of why she was a notable individual. The contributions to the early life section were fantastic and provided critical information as to how she ended up on the Dayton Project. The changes made definitely take this article to the next level! The lead is clear and concise, the tone is consistent with the rest of the article and the new content appears in the appropriate locations.