User:Planariaworm/Cat predation on wildlife/KMorales34 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Planariaworm


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Planariaworm/Cat_predation_on_wildlife?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
In the lead section, the second sentence is a very long run on sentence and can be easy to lose the reader or confuse them.

I noticed that for location you have very specific 'Hawaii' and on the current version of the article on wiki, the locations listed are all countries. I would suggest changing it from 'Hawaii' to 'United States'

When you mention studies that have been conducted I think that you should write who has conducted them. In the current version, they mention a study that they're grading data from but they also mention who. In the article they mention the Smithsonian.

I think explaining the measures society has had to take in order to stabilize cat numbers is an excellent addition to the current article.

I also did not know about ear tipping, although I think you should choose a different picture as it is very hard to see the tipped ear in the image you've chosen. I do think a reference picture for this topic is great too though.

For the 13th source "61 Fun Cat Statistics That Are the Cat’s Meow! (2022 UPDATE)" I dont think is a great source for information. It seems to be more like a blog website than anything. I also am not sure about the feltcave.com source either. Thats like a cat bed store. Your other sources like Cornell, American Bird Society and the US Dept of Interior are all great.

I think your contributions are relevant to the topic.

Overall I think you guys have done great work so far !