User:Planariaworm/Cat predation on wildlife/Lonelychild1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Cat predation on wildlife)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Planariaworm/Cat_predation_on_wildlife?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cat predation on wildlife

Lead Section
The lead section drafted does contain new information that was not present in the original article. The lead section is very concise and describes a few aspects of their topic.

Content
The information added is relevant to the topic and adds insightful information to the sections that already exist in the original article. The content added is up to date and adds more context to the sub sections of the article.

Tone and Balance
The information is written in a neutral tone and does not give an impression of trying to be persuasive. The viewpoints are not over or under represent in the content drafted.

Sources and references
All information provided in this draft have been properly cited by a reliable and credible source. The references are up to date and links are functional to allow readers to follow to the original article where the information came from.

Organization
The paragraphs and sections are well organized and follows very well. Each section is properly headed and follows the order of the original article.

Overall impression
This a very good start of a draft and has contributed essential information to the original article.

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)