User:Planti345/Death and the Internet/Erildape Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Planti345


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Planti345/Death_and_the_Internet&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template&veaction=edit&redirect=no
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Death and the Internet

Evaluate the drafted changes
The writer included one specific paragraph about Instagram's policies when it comes to dealing with deceased users' profiles. The content so far continues to be related to the topic of their article. The addition has a neutral tone, considering they are just reporting the regulations that Instagram must follow. Their sentence structure is also very easy to read. The writer plans on including a policy section for Microsoft as well, but they currently haven't gotten to it. They have only used one citation/source so far, but the link works. I'm hoping that when they come around to including Microsoft's section they will use the rest of their sources and develop their contributions a bit more. The one source they have used comes from Instagram's Help Center webpage, which I believe to be very reliable considering they are reporting on that same company's policies. The other sources they have in their bibliography include Microsoft's Help Center and a website with the POV of an attorney discussing the legalities of your social media rights once you pass. I think they set a really good foundation for their Wikipedia contributions.