User:Planti345/Death and the Internet/JCLemke Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Planti345


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Planti345/Death_and_the_Internet?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Death and the Internet

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead - N/A

Content - The content of the article is very concise and to the point. Only slight nitpick is the "as of the COVID-19 pandemic" part, it doesn't seem like it needs to be there.

Tone/Balance - The tone and balance is perfectly fine, with no major issues. It says exactly what it needs to say, no bias or anything.

Sources/References - Only one source from instagram, which ordinarily would be fine but the project requires three.

Organization - The content is organized very well, it's to the point and doesn't get excessively wordy.

Images/Media - N/A

Overall Impressions - It's written well, concise, and to the point. I would just remove the pandemic part and add more references. Other than that, no major issues.