User:Planti345/Death and the Internet/Natalieschindelheim Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Planti345


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Planti345/Death_and_the_Internet?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Death and the Internet

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that the draft that you wrote about Instagram's policies is very good. It is very detailed about how you can take someones' instagram account down if they have died. It is very important that you included that the person has to have some form of credibility to show that they are a family member to the person who has died. I think that adding another section about Microsoft and their policies is very smart and a great idea! If you wanted to talk about another platform, you can also include Snapchats' policies.