User:Plantl0v3r/Gender pay gap/IonaMink Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Plantl0v3r


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Plantl0v3r/Gender_pay_gap?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gender pay gap

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: The author has not added a lead section yet.

Content: The author added to the historical perspective and consequences sections. The use of empirical data was helpful. The most important contribution made by the author is the incorporation of a race/ethnicity component, to add an intersectional perspective to the article. There are a few more sections that the author intends to add to, such as reasons and policy measures.

Tone and Balance: The tone is neutral and the article is written in an academic/professional format.

Sources and References: The references are current and come from credible sources.

Organization: The article is well organized and interesting to read!