User:Pleavit2/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Romantic comedy

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
The article is a decent size but still has room for expansion

The topic is of interest to me and reliable source material to work with should be plentiful and easy to find

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

Even before the research portion of the assignment I see a lot of potential for improvement. Overall, the grammar and sentence structure in this article feels awkward and I’m seeing a lot of passive language. The entire page could flow a lot better with some sentence restructuring, but the choppiness may be a result of contributors trying to avoid close paraphrasing.

Plenty of space to include images from specified media.

Talk space has been archived; unedited since 2018. Much of the conversation is in regards to small additions and unbalanced focus from subject to subject throughout the article. Conversation also very casual. Mention of a one sentence paragraph which has since been edited/removed entirely, but there is another unrelated lone sentence in the currently.

The flag at the top of the page states that the article is primarily focused on the “American perspectives” of the genre. This presents an opportunity to discuss international romantic comedies such as European films, Korean-romance, or Bollywood creations.