User:Plewis77/Marajó Bay/Hogan Palmer Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hogan Palmer


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Plewis77/Marajó Bay


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Marajó Bay

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I think overall this is a great start to the article. Everything written thus far appears to be relevant, up to date, and precise. I think the layout of the article is great as well. I think it is possible for you guys to maybe have more sections to split into. Your citations seem to be accurate and your links appear to work which is great. I think if possible and applicable, you should add some history about the bay and maybe its significance throughout history.