User:Plizington/Elaboration likelihood model/$unflower93 Peer Review

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Plizington, Lawflower21,
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I am from the University of Pittsburgh at Greensburg and is assigned to review your article. ￼

I was reading the article and the section about Motivation caught my eye. I wanted to give my advice on the section based on what I read. The section was very clear on what it was talking about when it comes to the intensions of the theory being presented but there were a few concerns needing attention. For starters there needs to be more current research in the section other than from 1987. There was also a typing error in the last paragraph of the section. The word "more" should be added in between the words "thinking" and "than" which this would allow the sentence to form the meaning it was trying to get across. Other than these two suggestions I believe the way that the topic is broken down and explained makes this section and easy read in the article.