User:Plswrk/The Social Dilemma/AspirationallyAmy Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Plswrk


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Draft article link: The Social Dilemma sandbox


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Current article link: The Social Dilemma

Evaluate the drafted changes
It's unclear where the drafted changes are slated to go in the article, however the sources cited are credible and useful for helping contextualize what the film is about for readers, like me, who haven't seen the The Social Dilemma. I'm not sure how you plan to incorporate it in the final draft, but I wanted to flag that it looks like the New York Times source you've cited here is already referenced in the original article. Additionally, you may want to avoid the phrasing "recent article" to describe the New York Times article because it implies a time period that is relative to today, and will not remain accurate in perpetuity.