User:Plutocash55/Sharecroppers' Union/WWWWFWF Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Plutocash55


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Plutocash55/Sharecroppers%27_Union?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The first thing I noticed is the enormous paragraph in every section. Putting hundreds or even thousands of words into just one paragraph is not a good idea. Please split them into different paragraphs. Moreover, the lead seems weak and small. I suggest introducing more details about the sharecropper's Union in the lead.

Also, there are many times you use "there is a vast amount of evidence that supports this statement." It is not good content that should be placed on Wikipedia. You should put some quotes on it and introduce these evidences specifically to avoid conflicts.

As for the quote, I do not see any of the cite or quotes in the article's main body. It would be best if you put cites and quotes on those parts you need to show the data or important events to prove your words. The references alone may seem too weak and unclear.