User:Plutolunar/Congaree National Park/Ellenmbruce Peer Review

I think you did a really good job giving background on the native peoples practices on the land as well as explaining the different groups of native people from the area. It appears a lead still needs to be written. I think it could be beneficial to expand on a few points such as in the sentence ...caused impact on the landscape that can still be seen today, a quick clarification of what the impacts this caused are, or at the least if it positively or negatively impacted the land as well as mentioning if it was the settlers that were doing the burning and growing or if it was the native people because that is not very clear, if it is the native peoples practices you are talking about then you could maybe switch the second to last sentence to be before that one so the "who" is stated first. I think it could help with clarity and flow of your section to break up your paragraphs into smaller paragraphs of even just a few sections for example between the sentence about dialects and routine burning. I think it is okay to format stuff on wikipedia with paragraphs only being a few sentences over one topic but I could be wrong. Your last paragraph is good, the only thing I would mention is maybe who the settlers are/ where they were arriving from, if they were English people or if they were settlers from somewhere else that were then replaced by white Americans. A sentence to finish off your section about what the park is doing today could be a good way to end off, just stating whether efforts are being made to include the indigenous peoples in the park again or if there are no efforts being made to state that. Great work adding this valuable information to the wiki page!