User:Pmbdanni/Chemocline/Pjaml Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Pmbdanni


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Pmbdanni/Chemocline


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Chemocline

Evaluate the drafted changes
Looks like you're putting together a plan for your article changes, and you've found some good references. It seems like a good article to work on, there's not a lot in the original article and I'm not sure it does a very good job of explaining the subject. One thing I noticed about the "Chemocline structure" section of the original article is that there aren't many links to other Wikipedia articles in it. If you're expanding that section, it might be helpful to add links to relevant Wikipedia articles that will help clarify the details of chemocline structure.