User:Pmmuab77/Piaget's theory of cognitive development/Irvingca Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Pmmuab77


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Pmmuab77/Piaget%27s_theory_of_cognitive_development?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Piaget's theory of cognitive development

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead of this article could be edited more to accurately reflect the topics that will be covered under the subheadings. The sections of the article are barely described or introduced. It also feels too long and like most of the material in the lead could actually go somewhere deeper in the article. The content is relevant; however, not all of it seems to be up-to-date. There are some sections (the first one coming to mind being the section titled Postulated Physical Mechanisms Underlying Schemas and Stages) that could use more information that is current. The article itself seems to be neutral. The section about challenges to Piaget's theory is well written in that it does not try to persuade the reader to any one point of view. All of the source links work; however, many of the sources used in this article are outdated and could use some fresher titles. There should be tons of more literature on this topic.