User:Pocketsized24/Criminal psychology/Druss321 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Pocketsized24


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Pocketsized24/Criminal psychology


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Criminal psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
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One thing I noticed immediately is that I do not see the section for Fetal Alcohol Syndrome or Crime Prevention on the article. I am not sure if I am misreading your input or if someone has removed that section from the article. If it has been removed, then I imagine your contribution were needed as someone else found an issue with those paragraphs.

Your contributions are neutral and it seems like you are not presenting any controversial information. If anything, you are removing potentially harmful information about the likelihood for people with FAS to commit crimes. Have you considered maybe adding anything come critiques that people could have with criminal psychology? Have their been any examples throughout history where criminal psychologists have attacked marginalized groups for the "crimes" they commit? Could criminal psychology benefit from being more focused on the social environment of someone who has committed a crime instead of focusing on how the individual has resorted to "antisocial" behavior when they could be a product of their environment? If you could find good articles about this, I think this could fit into representing underrepresented voices.

Your sources seem reliable and have information that you present. They bring me to the adequate location.

A more controversial inclusion in the article that I noticed is the inclusion of the Stanford prison experiment. Since the experiment did not have a control group, it was technically not an experiment. Do you think there should be a not beside that example that mentions this?