User:Pointe15/User:Edenturpin/Agricultural zoning/Pointe15 Peer Review

General info
(provide username)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Edenturpin


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Edenturpin/Agricultural zoning
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Agricultural zoning

Evaluate the drafted changes
Section --> exclusive agricultural zoning


 * First sentence I think needs to be looked at/reworded
 * maybe add something about the process of EAZ approval when local governments are not dominated by farmers
 * third sentence, I think should say, "EAZ covered 6.3 million acres of land in portions of 43 states in agricultural and densely populated areas."
 * perhaps expand on why conflict between dwellings and farm uses is minimized
 * explain a bit more about what non-EAZ is at beginning of second paragraph
 * wording of this sentence: "The requirement for non-EAZ to a have a large amount of lot sizes allow for confirm landowners to..."
 * maybe get rid of the word confirm

Section --> Activism


 * change sentence to "hoping to grow a case on..."
 * did this potential case have a name?
 * can you expand a bit more on the details of the movement in the second paragraph

section --> farmer hostility


 * perhaps expand on the reverse of their hostility in 1970 and being in favor of now spreading the movement

section --> Property rights of agricultural land


 * can you explain how someone would be categorized into individual property rights or collective?
 * can you explain further the specific proximity to cities conversion would be done from?

for case studies section


 * for New York, do you mean "A law was established in NY" or a policy?
 * is there a date this implemented?
 * Can you provide more information on what the Urban Growth Boundary is?