User:Polarnatbear/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Sustainable_development&oldid=1204398846

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose to evaluate this article because it is relevant to what I am currently learning.

Evaluate the article
The article provides a great example of what sustainable development is, but I believe there is a lot more that they can do to go fully in depth about it. At the end of the article, they briefly mention SDGs and although this isn't the article about SDGs, they could've added more information about all the goals so people only reading this article would have a better understanding of what they are. Some parts of this article fall a little short in comparison to others (gender and leadership) but overall I think the article is really well written because it's not going too in depth about certain sustainability actions but is still describing sustainable development, while providing a neutral tone letting the reader take their own perspective on sustainable development.— ~