User:Polstamin/Social media in the 2020 United States presidential election/Abigailmanurung Peer Review

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Social media in the 2020 United States Presidential Election


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The author(s) started the article with a great introduction about how social media was used by politicians recently. Then they provided examples how Bernie Sanders used social media for his campaign and how it impacted his campaign. They provided a good evidence that was relevant to their claim. They also gave another examples how the social media was being used by third party as well. Lastly, they also have a section about tiktok and how it is used by different parties. Overall, they did really good with explaining how social media was being used by politicians for their campaign. They also gave out a good claim as well as reasoning supporting its evidence. It would be great to add a section about good and bad impacts of social media during the elections.

'''thank you for the suggestion! I will definitely think about putting that one.''' I think it may be against the neutrality to try and make particular judgements about specific positive and negative effects of social media, but the feedback is still useful to add in others' arguments about it.