User:Polusushi/Atherinomorus insularum/Zmsumida Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Polusushi


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Atherinomorus insularum (Polusushi's sandbox draft)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Atherinomorus insularum
 * Atherinomorus insularum

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall the content is there and all of the prompts have been addressed. Some of my only suggestions for this article would be to include metric units (meters), as Professor had reminded me about that as well, and to switch the bullet points to paragraph form. One other small suggestion I have would be to either link or maybe in-text cite the quotes that were included. Otherwise, I think this draft was well-written with a sufficient amount of reliable information and just needs to be fleshed out; which can be done when it's reformatted into paragraphs.

Thank you for the input. The metric units are new to me and I’m glad you mentioned it especially it’s coming from Professor to add them. I definitely will take note of all these and imply them on my updates to my article. -Polusushi