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Prompt: Image that you could give advice to someone…it could be someone you know, a historical figure, a famous person living today. Write an essay that identifies the person and the advice you would give them. Choose familiar subjects so that you can provide details and elaboration that explain why this person needs your advice.

THING to a Crazy THING

When in a tolerable learning environment there are certain things you notice that you might have a comment on some of the things done in the room. Certain pieces of advice that you would like to give to the person in charge to make it a better education system. One of these many people is Ms. THING or, by many of the students around her, THING.

To begin with Ms. THING is a lady that THINGD among an uncontrollable and hormonal eighth grade class. Ms. THEADSA does so many things such as the yearbook, acting, and taking care of a little chihuahua named Pinkie. Ms. DFS acts for a theater group called DJSKAFDS mostly playing the roles in shows involving murder. Similar to most teachers in the world MsTHDAS has her bad days where she goes totally insane for a good reason… migraines. Often these are caused THING1 and THING2, two students in her class, who make her life a living hell. Besides those two individuals Ms. THING gets extreme migraines caused by none other than the lack of water she consumes, or maybe she’s diseased. In either event she tends to get cranky and yell, causing all students to quiver in fear. Ms. THING is actually a very high-quality teacher that gets things done and gives students the grade they deserve but I would give her a few certain pieces of advice to help her THING experience be more enjoyable.

My first piece of advice involves Ms. THING water intake. Often I see her drinking THING THING or THING; the drinks that dehydrate you the most. This lack of water causing a less than severe dehydration effect may be the root of the source of the migraines she experiences. My specific advice to solve these migraines would be to carry around a small thirty two ounce THING water bottle to drink not as needed but every ten minutes or so drink to be hydrated. It may not feel like you need to drink but to keep a head ache or migraine at bay it helps. You can never drink to much water and it isn’t that had to do it’s not as if you’re drinking rocks.

My second and final piece of advice engages the fact that Ms THING does too much. She seems so stressed at times that I worry she will explode and get the whole class soaked with the remains of the explosion. To sole this problem I would advise her to drop one of the things such as yearbook. The extra hundred dollars a year is not that much when it comes in six cent increments which are a hardly usable amount of money. She is very good at directing the yearbook but in order to make her life slightly more enjoyable on top of grading all the papers, memorizing all the lines in a script for theater, and just overall working; she has to let something go. I balanced swimming, school, honor society, baseball, and soccer all in one month for a short time once and I hated it. It drove me over the edge and I started to take my frustration out on other people and things. It isn’t right not to have any free time; everybody needs there life to stay balanced.

Certain pieces of advice are always helpful to people. Never is there a day where constructive criticism or good advice goes by without being used. Ms. THING is one of the figures in the world that I live in that I already I gave some of this advice and it has helped her a lot in retrospect.

Prompt: Image that you could give advice to someone…it could be someone you know, a historical figure, a famous person living today. Write an essay that identifies the person and the advice you would give them. Choose familiar subjects so that you can provide details and elaboration that explain why this person needs your advice.

THING to a Crazy THING When in a tolerable learning environment there are certain things you notice that you might have a comment on some of the things done in the room. Certain pieces of advice that you would like to give to the person in charge to make it a better education system. One of these many people is Ms. THING or, by many of the students around her, THING.

To begin with Ms. THING is a lady that THINGD among an uncontrollable and hormonal eighth grade class. Ms. THEADSA does so many things such as the yearbook, acting, and taking care of a little chihuahua named Pinkie. Ms. DFS acts for a theater group called DJSKAFDS mostly playing the roles in shows involving murder. Similar to most teachers in the world MsTHDAS has her bad days where she goes totally insane for a good reason… migraines. Often these are caused THING1 and THING2, two students in her class, who make her life a living hell. Besides those two individuals Ms. THING gets extreme migraines caused by none other than the lack of water she consumes, or maybe she’s diseased. In either event she tends to get cranky and yell, causing all students to quiver in fear. Ms. THING is actually a very high-quality teacher that gets things done and gives students the grade they deserve but I would give her a few certain pieces of advice to help her THING experience be more enjoyable.

My first piece of advice involves Ms. THING water intake. Often I see her drinking THING THING or THING; the drinks that dehydrate you the most. This lack of water causing a less than severe dehydration effect may be the root of the source of the migraines she experiences. My specific advice to solve these migraines would be to carry around a small thirty two ounce THING water bottle to drink not as needed but every ten minutes or so drink to be hydrated. It may not feel like you need to drink but to keep a head ache or migraine at bay it helps. You can never drink to much water and it isn’t that had to do it’s not as if you’re drinking rocks.

My second and final piece of advice engages the fact that Ms THING does too much. She seems so stressed at times that I worry she will explode and get the whole class soaked with the remains of the explosion. To sole this problem I would advise her to drop one of the things such as yearbook. The extra hundred dollars a year is not that much when it comes in six cent increments which are a hardly usable amount of money. She is very good at directing the yearbook but in order to make her life slightly more enjoyable on top of grading all the papers, memorizing all the lines in a script for theater, and just overall working; she has to let something go. I balanced swimming, school, honor society, baseball, and soccer all in one month for a short time once and I hated it. It drove me over the edge and I started to take my frustration out on other people and things. It isn’t right not to have any free time; everybody needs there life to stay balanced.

Certain pieces of advice are always helpful to people. Never is there a day where constructive criticism or good advice goes by without being used. Ms. THING is one of the figures in the world that I live in that I already I gave some of this advice and it has helped her a lot in retrospect.