User:Popadock15/Sleep disorder/Asherm4802 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Popadock15


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Popadock15/Sleep_disorder?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sleep disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
The leading paragraph is very well written and has a good bit of information in it. One suggestion would be finding who created the meta-analysis mentioned in the first paragraph so it can be cited and give a little more information because it feels a little vague. Another suggestion would be checking grammatical errors in the first paragraph. The first sentence of the article body also does not have a citation on it. Another suggestion for the leading paragraph would be to discuss what specific sleep disorders you will be covering. Overall I believe this is a great draft and the article has well balanced and easy to understand information.