User:Popadock15/Sleep disorder/Jtc7 Peer Review

When reading the article and the edits made. I believe that the edits went great with the article is stay on topic while at the same time adding additional information that could be greatly appreciated by the readers.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)