User:Popej811/Effects of divorce/Conormorty Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Verboomd, EmilyR123
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Effects of divorce

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? Yes
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Yes
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? No
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? Concise and to the point

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes
 * Is the content added up-to-date? Yes
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? They don't entertain the fact that some divorces may benefit childs well-being in some aspects, while aiding in other reasons. Although divorce is ultimately negative, there are benefits to divorce, or else it would not happen. Perhaps it could benefit from a section on positive benefits of divorce, such as removing a violent parent from the house.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? Yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? The viewpoint of abused children is left out, as they may often have increased states of wellbeing after a divorce.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? Yes, it leads the reader to believe divorces are entirely negative.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? Yes
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Yes
 * Are the sources current? Yes
 * Check a few links. Do they work? Yes

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Yes, except for the lack of various headers to indicate what is being discussed.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? No
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? No, there is only one heading for the article, whereas the information provided touches on multiple different topics.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? No
 * Are images well-captioned? N/A
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? N/A
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? N/A

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? Yes
 * What are the strengths of the content added? N/A
 * How can the content added be improved? Adding visuals as well as various headings

Overall evaluation
The information presented was accurate and well-cited. However it could benefit from being better spaced out, with more headings to add clarity. It could also benefit a discussion about the improved well-being that may occur in problematic households, such as those with abuse or neglect.