User:Popsgoestheweasel/Congress of Racial Equality/Rswendra Peer Review

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Popsgoestheweasel
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 * Congress of Racial Equality

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:

The lead has not been updated by the students.

Content:

I think the content added is relevant to the article specifically the addtion of information regarding Irene Morgan because this specific event led to member of CORE to refine their tactics. It illustrates where the movement came from and explains why they began to use non-violent methods. Furthermore, the addtion of information regarding the international activities of the movement dives deeper into the actions they took and the impact the organization had globally.

Tone and Balance:

I did not find any pieces of the text that seemed to be persuading the reader to take a particular stance regarding the topic. The article has information that is well-balanced and written in a simple unbiased format.

Sources and References:

I would say that the sources are relatively diverse and offer perspectives from those who have been marginalized within their lives. The sources also seem to be from reliable authors and organizations that have possibly been peer reviewed.

Organization:

The addition of new information provided by the students easily fits into place among the existing article information; for example, in the existing article paragraphs regarding the various CORE chapters only offers information about a two chapters, so the students researched various chapters that played important roles in this organization which allows for a deeper understandig of the topic. They went into detail on the values of each chapter, who founded them, and the impact each chapter had on the overall goals of CORE.

Images and Media:

NA

Overall impressions:

The information added to the existing article allow for a more well-rounded understanding of the topic. The students chose to add information that I found to be vital and helpful in understanding the movements goals, actions, and the outcome of each. Furthermore, the format and execution of the assignment allows readers to clearly comprehend the new and old information when placed together. Examples of the new articles strengths include its continuous flow between the existing article information and the new sources and paragraphs add, and the expansion of information regarding the various chapters and goals of the CORE organization.