User:Porter2226/Archicortex/AJS1998 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username) - Porter2226's article on Archicortex
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Archicortex

Lead evaluation
The lead section is at time not very easy to understand. I do appreciate that the well described structure is really interesting and important, but the lead doesn't expand on the "information-processing" capabilities, and only describes structures not very concisely (I would recommend a better flow of information, as the paragraphs are a bit disconnected in regards to what they are trying to explain).

Content and sources evaluation
Reviewing the sources, most were from the late 20th century and only one was a more recent one (2011). In my opinion, using recent research would expand this article significantly, as the writers would then potentially have better explanations for the function and mechanisms of Archicortex, not only its structure. On the other hand, the sources used are mostly from scholarly articles, except one: "Paleocortex", which is from a university's interactive bio website. Despite being useful, this information should be found in scholarly articles, making it more valid, and facilitating analysis since it should provide a deeper scope on the topic (use the scholarly articles referenced on this website - this should solve the problem).

Tone and balance evaluation
My greatest concern is the exploration of the function of this brain structure. 'Geographical' arrangements are always great for the reader to grasp a general view, but the mechanisms of activation, even if not very well understood, have to be more explicitly analyzed. The section "Memory" was very underrepresented, and in my personal opinion, should be headed "Function", for a more general grasp of the role of the Archicortex (even if it's just involved in memory function). Despite this, the article is very neutral, and covers the anatomy and basic biology of the structure really well.

Overall evaluation
My overall impression is that this article is well written, has depth in the anatomical analysis of this cortex, and has the potential to be developed to encompass a more detailed explanation of how this structure plays a role in information processing in the brain.