User:Potatofeets/Cuba–Ethiopia relations/Marialobatograbowsky Peer Review

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Potato feets


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 * User:Potatofeets/Cuba–Ethiopia relations


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cuba–Ethiopia relations

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I thought this article did a great job at providing a neutral stance. It provided a good summary of the war between Ethiopia and Somalia and the reasons for Cuba's involvement in the war and lasting relationship between the two countries. One thing to improve the draft could be making the section about the Soviet Union and Cuba a bit longer to match the length of the History section. Or, you could also break up the History section, since the last two paragraphs focus on the present state of the relationship of the two countries. You could create a new section titled "Present" or something, so that those two paragraphs fit more nicely under the title. A lead section that summarizes your article could also be something to add that would help the reader better understand what the article aims to explain.