User:Pothosjoy3/Caregiver stress/Dandelions-love-to-fly Peer Review

General info
Pothosjoy3
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing?
 * User:Pothosjoy3/Caregiver stress
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Caregiver stress

Evaluate the drafted changes
I thought your article was a good start! I think you added a lot of good sources and facts that just need to be more developed! Such as the fact about caregivers working 40 hours a week providing these jobs. Maybe you can add a statistic on how many caregivers work a job on top of caregiving. I don't know if we are allowed to use case studies, but I do like that the case study does give an idea of how caregivers feel. However, having a case study could be a little bias because it is only one persons perspective of caregivers stress. Most of references are current and reliable. The only source I am not sure about is the Oncology Nursing Forum, because I am not sure if we were supposed to use forums as a part of wiki. Some citation need to be added on the last paragraph. The flow of your article could use more development and organization. However, I know this is just the start so overall I get where you are trying to go with this. Good work!!

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