User:Pothosjoy3/Caregiver stress/Ladyrainicorn13 Peer Review

General info
Pothosjoy3
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Pothosjoy3/Caregiver stress
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Caregiver stress

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Maybe try to use less quotes and put the thoughts in your own words?
 * for the sections using: Care for the cancer caregiver: A systematic review | Palliative & Supportive Care | Cambridge Core ....
 * using quotes could definitely help for the actual information, but maybe shorten it to the specific stats/findings and add your own words for the rest?


 * could help to label the sections that you're working on for more organization?
 * if the edits you included are for the intro I think they're great additions for context
 * they necessarily humanize and provide understanding for the caregiver experience without trying to argue anything or show a certain bias- good choices!


 * could be beneficial to add more links in the support section for caregivers to look at if they need help?
 * tone seems neutral, doesn't seem to have any bias, or attempt to skew in any way- good job on that
 * inclusion of the screening table seems like a great idea!
 * maybe a specific section or subsection specifically for screening and its significance could be good as well
 * Prevention section- could be beneficial to provide a short description of what these options are rather than just internal links to Wikipedia- could make it more accessible to the reader
 * Could add a section on new research studies being funded or considered since this is a subject that has much less info than it should in psych research?