User:Ppprru/Film noir/Kyleighkimbrell Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ppprru


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ppprru/Film_noir?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The deaf boy  - make sure your language throughout the article matches appropriate disability representation for example "person with a disability" opposed to "disabled person" so here, instead of saying "deaf boy" use "the boy who is deaf"

and got killded at the end. - typing mishap, killed not killded

In numerous noir film, - films not film

most of their husband were - husbands not husband

these minority played the unimportant - these characters that represent the minority played the unimportant

the films allowed audience for an anti-ableist - allowed the audience to have an anti-ableist (take out the films and adjust wording.)