User:Pqip/Scotoplanes globosa/Rpsenka Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Pqip


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Pqip/Scotoplanes globosa


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Scotoplanes globosa

Evaluate the drafted changes
I thought that you did a great job with the added information! In the sandbox, the information appears to be cited correctly and the language is accessible. I like how the information from the article was summarized and implemented in the wikipedia article. The information is properly cited so that the authors work is properly given credit. One note about how to improve the added content is for ecology. Instead of having two beginning large sentences, they could be condensed to "Congregations of smaller Scotoplanes globosa are often observed on the ocean floor in groups of 10 to 30 individuals, but have been documented in groups of up to 600 individuals". This is more of a stylistic comment, but the information in the two sentences is informative. Lastly, whenever a number is given, like 10 to 30, a unit should be given as well to make sure the context is understood. Otherwise, this sandbox was well done.