User:Prabh1899/sandbox

Hi Prabh,

While looking at the work that you have done on your article draft it seems as though you have a great handle on what you are trying to accomplish with this article. I believe you are right in saying that the sentence structure could be improved and this in itself may make the article easier to read for the general public. If you, and your group worked on making these sentences flow better and maybe used words that are better known by a general audience it would definitely benefit the article greatly. In addition to these things, the ideas that you have stated to give the article more content are also very beneficial. If we look at things that you could potentially do to create an even better article, maybe you could focus on one particular aspect of the Global South that you think is necessary for the general public to have knowledge on. This way, you will help make at least one important topic about the Global South be very well understood. All in all, you have a good plan in place for your article draft. With a little digging to make the content deeper I think you will be well underway.

Article Evaluation "Global South"

As i looked at the article "Global South" the first thing that caught my attention was the structure of sentences, they have potential of improving. This will also help improve structure of the article. The Global South can also use a more organised definition. I felt the sentences in the article did not exactly have continuity to them. Sources used were able to substantiate the material used. However, i think they can use bit more elaboration for the audience to understand what one is trying to convey. The article has equal tone to it for most part.

The article does a decent job on giving a simple idea as to what Global South is but has a lot of potential to it. Topics such as following can be used to give the article more material: What and why are countries categorized in Global South? What are governments doing for their development? One can also look into lifestyles of people in these countries.

Prabh ~