User:PreoccupiedWarlock/Type VII Secretion System/Brooks86 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

PreoccupiedWarlock


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 * User:PreoccupiedWarlock/Type VII Secretion System


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Evaluate the drafted changes
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It looks like you have some really good information to go off of. The sources all look excellent, although a few need some more information to be complete. I think it would be better to expound on the bullet points, maybe do a short paragaph on how each of the organisms use the system.