User:PreoccupiedWarlock/Type VII Secretion System/JonnyBoy6989 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

PreoccupiedWarlock, Sparkly Amoeba, Abri.paez!, Dabbsarah19


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Type VII secretion system


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
One thing that I would like to see are advantages to this type of system over others. You have a very strong introduction with good reliable citations with links that actually work which is good, however I feel like lots of the information in this paragraph doesn't belong, such when it was discovered. This would be something that would be great in it's own section, and I wouldn't even include it in the introduction. I feel like with 4 people editing this article that there should be more to read, but there was only 1 paragraph for me to read. Looking forward to additional information.