User:PreoccupiedWarlock/Type VII Secretion System/Kkiing08 Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
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This article has a strong lead into what it could be about. It talks well about the Type IV secretion system. In addition, I would like to add that the first and only paragraph so far gets another review/ edit to it as there are some minor grammatical errors. Also, include how other organisms may secrete proteins and how they compare/ differ from type IV secretion system.