User:Prepharm24/Elf (film)/Kalabasasss332 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Prepharm24 (Prepharm24/ Elf (film)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Prepharm24/Elf_%28film%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * (Same as above)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article draft discusses the filming background and prediction of the film Elf. With the information presented, there are a few things I’d like to acknowledge. First of all, the layout and organization of this article as it stands is great! However, I would encourage adding some of the filming process while the movie was being created. In other words, what are some things about the film that not a lot of people know about that could impact your article? The references and citations line up and are fully accessible. However, I would encourage more in text citations so the audience has a deeper understanding of which reference refers to which section. The information you’ve presented does not go off topic and lines up perfectly. In addition to this, the structure thus far makes sense as how you are planning to layout this article.