User:PresleyThor/National Marine Sanctuary Article./Acuna035 Peer Review

General info
User:PresleyThor/National Marine Sanctuary Article.
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xJ8PukM-D_52TY1H8IUK9O73pxiNvjDwE1NenleQRt0/edit#heading=h.an6a3iqny7i4
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * National Marine Sanctuary

Evaluate the drafted changes
What you have composed for the article so far looks great! It is noticeable you reviewed the grammar and spelling of your work. I would recommend adding photos to your article so it seems more engaging and highlights the conversation. Examples of images may include charts, data, climate comparisons over the years, etc. When including photos, remember to include appropriate captions to be sure the audience is aware of the relevance of the photo. Perhaps users will first look at the images, enticing them to read the article based on the context of the caption. In your article, you mentioned the goal to restore 30% of land and water by 2030; extend this conversation by mentioning the steps that will be taken to achieve this. Additionally, the "Scope of Protection" is a brief paragraph, more can be added to this context on the measures being taken. Good luck as you continue to work on the article, you're off to a good start.