User:Presleyjackson/9 (2005 film)/Moth1999 Peer Review

General info

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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 9 (2005 film)

Peer Review

 * Very detailed and well-worded plot; couple of cosmetic changes:
 * Replace the colon in sentence "The Cat Beast follows and reveals that it has not only taken the other rag dolls' souls:" with a hyphen
 * Sentence fragment at end of fifth paragraph "But it has fallen into 9's trap." - consider rephrasing and combining sentences
 * "This all reveals that all the things"
 * No need for hyphen in "cleverly-made trap"
 * Concise and interesting "themes" section!
 * Great job overall! :)