User:Preston Daily/Schizotypal personality disorder/Jassytron Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Schizotypal personality disorder, Preston Daily & Dguy17


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Preston%20Daily/Schizotypal_personality_disorder?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Schizotypal personality disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
It's challenging to locate changes made and additions added because the entire article is posted to the sandbox for editing. Regardless, there are numerous strong sources presented, and the changes I can identify are worded well and are well placed.

I do have some suggestions, if you are amenable to them. Perhaps it would be well placed to discuss what the STPD screening tests screen for? Or perhaps discuss in a little more depth the differences between the two screening tests mentioned in the article? Are there studies or survey data that look further at epidemiological demographics? Is there research into comorbidities beyond just finding connection and correlation? As well, the treatment section could use some assistance; the clarification needed tag is still present in that second paragraph of therapy. Additionally, "follow-up" is misspelled in the medication section.

Overall, a solid foundational start with plenty of room to grow! Good job!